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Her scream
Her flesh smelled of velvet with a taste of peppermint as I slowly pull my
Clothing aside,,within my touch I molest her churning of arousal as I cup her breast ..slowly I turn to begin the rape I assured was love yet her gesture
turned to shreiks as I consumed the penetration of her soaked lips push back
unto the torture I penned as I rip the vail from her legs ,,choking ,as she cries choking her harder as my masturbation exploded in my hands for I smear the birth over her breast,there I wail into anal pleads as Iam erected beyond
lustful imagination as so her screams become a escape while beating her into a beautiful pose of art I needed to dress over and over as she felt so warm when the taste of her flesh created the demon in my head yet the being I found inside
Bellowed as my cocks pen bled where she lies lifeless,fore my pain smeared across her lips..
Clothing aside,,within my touch I molest her churning of arousal as I cup her breast ..slowly I turn to begin the rape I assured was love yet her gesture
turned to shreiks as I consumed the penetration of her soaked lips push back
unto the torture I penned as I rip the vail from her legs ,,choking ,as she cries choking her harder as my masturbation exploded in my hands for I smear the birth over her breast,there I wail into anal pleads as Iam erected beyond
lustful imagination as so her screams become a escape while beating her into a beautiful pose of art I needed to dress over and over as she felt so warm when the taste of her flesh created the demon in my head yet the being I found inside
Bellowed as my cocks pen bled where she lies lifeless,fore my pain smeared across her lips..
Published 25th Nov 2013
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25th Nov 2013 3:54am
Hello
It's not often I read this type of genre now but I really appreciated this write. It is cleverly compiled and unhinging as read. I really enjoyed this as its untypical and unexpected to me at least
The only thing I found maybe a bit distracting was all the exclamation marks in the penultimate line It kind of weakened the strength of that statement for me. ( maybe just personal taste). Other than that a mighty fine piece of writing. Cheers syn
It's not often I read this type of genre now but I really appreciated this write. It is cleverly compiled and unhinging as read. I really enjoyed this as its untypical and unexpected to me at least
The only thing I found maybe a bit distracting was all the exclamation marks in the penultimate line It kind of weakened the strength of that statement for me. ( maybe just personal taste). Other than that a mighty fine piece of writing. Cheers syn
25th Nov 2013 4:14am
