deepundergroundpoetry.com
Unknown
And I know right where you are
Just outside the periphery...
Kept inside a little box
It's looking more and more empty
Could I believe that she was once whole?
She was
Just outside the periphery...
Kept inside a little box
It's looking more and more empty
Could I believe that she was once whole?
She was
Published 24th Nov 2013
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 621
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
24th Nov 2013 5:51am
Nice write... Short and sweet but it makes ya think. Can relate to this!
KFH
KFH
Anonymous
24th Nov 2013 4:29pm
The mind seeks conclusion... this teaser, a glimpse of "her", set it in motion trying to fill in the blanks. Love the simplicity and mystery of this piece. Perfectly incomplete - just as she appears to be.
24th Nov 2013 6:34pm
25th Nov 2013 1:05am
