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Me
Early morning
I watched the sun ascend a clear sky
While my body stood shrouded by the frosty breeze
I witnessed a blood red orb turn the sky to fire
And beheld my namesake
Kaulakua
The Red Dawn
Suffering that little death once again
Of beauty, luscious and sweet
All consuming in its wonder
Awe inspiring in its glory
Losing myself in those minutes when the moon cedes way to the sun's rebirth
Shrouded in the frosty breeze
I watched the sun ascend a clear sky
And witnessed The Red Dawn
Kaulakua
I watched the sun ascend a clear sky
While my body stood shrouded by the frosty breeze
I witnessed a blood red orb turn the sky to fire
And beheld my namesake
Kaulakua
The Red Dawn
Suffering that little death once again
Of beauty, luscious and sweet
All consuming in its wonder
Awe inspiring in its glory
Losing myself in those minutes when the moon cedes way to the sun's rebirth
Shrouded in the frosty breeze
I watched the sun ascend a clear sky
And witnessed The Red Dawn
Kaulakua
Published 23rd Nov 2013
| Edited 28th Nov 2013
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25th Nov 2013 6:51pm
Beautiful, I love it! The last stanza is my favorite :) The only critique I can give is I think lucious is spelled "luscious". Other then that, this is awesome! :) Thank you for sharing!
28th Nov 2013 8:53am
Thank you i had i little issue about that and figured what the hell someone will help me out eventually :) glad u enjoyed!
13th Apr 2014 6:02am
Anonymous
3rd May 2015 8:31am
Enchanting lines, sunsets can be memorable, what does Kaulakua mean?
5th May 2015 6:26am
In Hawaiian Kaulakua means The Red Dawn and it's my middle name. I was fortunate enough to see my first red sunrise camping one summer when the sun rose the color of blood and fire off the horizon...it's a memory never to be forgotten.
Anonymous
5th May 2015 2:00pm
Thank you for your explanation, very interesting and inspiring to read about this!
