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Calm
Calm
Serene, tranquil,relaxed, collected
Calm as a tree, is how I like to be.
Serene, tranquil,relaxed, collected
Calm as a tree, is how I like to be.
Published 21st Nov 2013
| Edited 22nd Nov 2013
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21st Nov 2013 2:45pm
21st Nov 2013 3:24pm
Anonymous
21st Nov 2013 8:14pm
seems the other two missed your point, who wants to be like a tree, "dead". If we are "Calm
Serene, tranquil,relaxed, collected, like a tree, we might as well be dead. So did they get your point, or did I?
Serene, tranquil,relaxed, collected, like a tree, we might as well be dead. So did they get your point, or did I?
22nd Nov 2013 2:14pm
You can look at both of them either way, but in the end they are both at peace. I had a feeling someone would think of it as being "dead". All and all though no one is right and no one is wrong. :)
