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I'll never leave this bathtub!

First one foot. Then the other one

Slowly! It pours down my whole body.

It makes me feel so weak

like a child, it makes me wanna pee!



Dense, fluid bubbles

I cast from my mouth

I cannot hold it! Acre smell of urine

Can’t but have a cemented dumb sneer,

as this liquid fills my nose, my lungs,

this concrete,

making me snort like a pig
Written by Laurbaerson
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