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To Be or Not to be
If we are made of the same stuff that dreams are made of
and dreams do often conceal our desires,
that means we are made of wishes.
So, if a choice is ever given,
if choice isn't an illusion,
I chose not to be,
because the real strength is to have no longing.
and dreams do often conceal our desires,
that means we are made of wishes.
So, if a choice is ever given,
if choice isn't an illusion,
I chose not to be,
because the real strength is to have no longing.
Published 19th Nov 2013
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19th Nov 2013 10:51pm
19th Nov 2013 11:41pm
20th Nov 2013 6:42am
Intriguing indepth piece. Has me running circular thoughts. Really enjoyed this as much as your other write.i like your style and subject matter.
I did stumble a bit tongue tied on the last line over (the) just wondered if it was necessary ? But it's your baby and we all have our own expressive nature ( that makes us unique.)
Thanks for sharing. Syn
I did stumble a bit tongue tied on the last line over (the) just wondered if it was necessary ? But it's your baby and we all have our own expressive nature ( that makes us unique.)
Thanks for sharing. Syn
20th Nov 2013 10:32am
Sorry for that! Since english isn't my native language, my poems might contain accidental flaws like this one! I do really appreciate the fact you enjoyed this piece, and I appreciate even more this ''correction'' you made. Thank you!
