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The soft wind rustles in your hair
As the soft wind rustles in your beautiful hair
Your smile warms my heart who needs care
As the sun lights your lovely green eyes
Your perfume excites all my senses wise
As numerous stars shine in the wide space
Your nice eyes gleam in your full face
As universe respects the gravity's theory
Your love is a strong help for my poetry
As the pale sky announces the future dawn
Your skin is pale with some reflects of fawn
As bells announce the beginning of mass
Your giggle announces time of happiness
I never fell in love with a pretty young girl
As you did with me, you seems very frail
But the strength of your wise character
Magnifies the beauty of your mind clever
In competition in "4 trophies or less"
Published 19th Nov 2013
| Edited 20th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2013 5:42am
Good luck Malin, its a lovely tribute for your love, it has such a delicate sense to it, well done my friend.
just one minor fix, if i may.
As the sun lights lovely your green eyes
should be:
As the sun lights your lovely green eyes.
otherwise its pretty good!
just one minor fix, if i may.
As the sun lights lovely your green eyes
should be:
As the sun lights your lovely green eyes.
otherwise its pretty good!
20th Nov 2013 6:39am
