Darkside of the moon

I like this poem. I am trying to learn some of the technical tricks involved in poetry writing. This poem seems to follow a pattern which makes it roll of the tongue easier when read aloud. Each of the four sections seems to have it's own internal logic. The 3rd section is like quick observations, each beginning w/ an adjective or adverb:
Glistening beads
abundant aromas
abandoned kisses
shameless sins
The fourth section seems to be one long statement; the goal of the poem & your romance:
Join me there
we linger forever
seducing the dark side
of the moon.

Thankyou for your careful observations :)

good writing
easy flow
feeling the lust
it works
well done

Thankyou Sir :)

Awesome write sweets!!!
Very well written!!


Sir Lancelott

Thankyou so much Sir! :)

This is a great poem, as someone else
said, rolls off the tongue, and it
plays with the senses. It's sensual,
a foreplay of words that leave to the
imagination....nicely done:)

Thankyou Amy...much appreciate your comment :)
And thankyou for adding me :)

mmmm toy..how sweet it is! a sensually complete piece..love it!
~Tom

Thankyou Tom...lovely comment :)

D rhythm of emotions….drim drim…

nice comment...thankyou :)

I could able to listen d beat…still listing…

an elegant portrayal of lust on the darkside, & romance in the elegance...

Thankyou,kind Sir :)

Very seductive yet it oozes romance & sex appeal with a hint of innocence to it.
It was quite beautiful, but at the same time managed to be sexy without being vulgar.

Thank you  :)