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Dew
Clouds of breath rise, meet
the obscuring mist veiling
our merging silhouettes.
Coldness forgotten,
I kneel and welcome warm flesh
in bilabial embrace,
greet crystal clear drips,
anticipate the pulsing and tingling
of unashamed desire
on my expectant tongue.
I’m ravished by
the almost inaudible sigh
of your surrender.
Your lust
settles like dew
on my lips.
the obscuring mist veiling
our merging silhouettes.
Coldness forgotten,
I kneel and welcome warm flesh
in bilabial embrace,
greet crystal clear drips,
anticipate the pulsing and tingling
of unashamed desire
on my expectant tongue.
I’m ravished by
the almost inaudible sigh
of your surrender.
Your lust
settles like dew
on my lips.
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Re: Dew
Anonymous
14th Nov 2013 9:08pm
lovely Miss Chi...very sensual and welcoming..exquisitely arousing write my friend ..:)
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Chi shyly curtsies :-).
Thank you Tom, also for the reading list entry!
Hope I haven't
shaken the image of
your badass biker babe :-).
Thank you Tom, also for the reading list entry!
Hope I haven't
shaken the image of
your badass biker babe :-).
Re: Dew
Anonymous
14th Nov 2013 9:11pm
Miss Chi,
A very sensual moment in time you have captured! Loved your line: "I’m ravished by the almost inaudible sigh of your surrender"
Hot sexy write! Enjoyed!!!
An interesting word, this 'bilabial' ; )
tornado
A very sensual moment in time you have captured! Loved your line: "I’m ravished by the almost inaudible sigh of your surrender"
Hot sexy write! Enjoyed!!!
An interesting word, this 'bilabial' ; )
tornado
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Well, being a linguist,
I'm quite familiar with
bilabials which I dearly like :-).
Thank you my dear friend for enjoying my
little sashay into the world of
phonemes :-).
I'm quite familiar with
bilabials which I dearly like :-).
Thank you my dear friend for enjoying my
little sashay into the world of
phonemes :-).
Re: Dew
14th Nov 2013 10:02pm
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Haha! Thanks a lot, JeJe,
and also for the reading list entry!
I'm humbled and appreciate your comment!
I should use it more often, then,
in order to impress people!
and also for the reading list entry!
I'm humbled and appreciate your comment!
I should use it more often, then,
in order to impress people!
Re: Dew
14th Nov 2013 10:42pm
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15th Nov 2013 7:19pm
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15th Nov 2013 00:05am
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15th Nov 2013 7:22pm
You clearly need to warm up somehow
in our lines of latitude.
Always aime to please :-).
Thanks, Paul!
in our lines of latitude.
Always aime to please :-).
Thanks, Paul!
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15th Nov 2013 00:20am
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15th Nov 2013 7:27pm
Oh, I'd rather delete my
risqué and scandalous little
outpour!
What else but dripping words
may come from dewy lips!
Scandalous comment, J. and I love it!
risqué and scandalous little
outpour!
What else but dripping words
may come from dewy lips!
Scandalous comment, J. and I love it!
Re: Dew
Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 2:12am
Extremely sensual!!
I love the wording, Ms Chi you've outdone yourself with this one. Very Impressive!
I love the wording, Ms Chi you've outdone yourself with this one. Very Impressive!
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15th Nov 2013 7:29pm
I'm humbled by your very kind
and welcome words, Vee, all the more
as you are one of the most skilled
poets on DU. Thank you so much!
and welcome words, Vee, all the more
as you are one of the most skilled
poets on DU. Thank you so much!
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Sep 2018 4:45pm
15th Nov 2013 2:37am
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15th Nov 2013 7:36pm
Well, lonelyvoyager,
your extremely elaborated
and acutely kind comment
is as extraordinary beautiful as
my poem seems to be to you.
I'm humbled and rendered speechless.
Thank you so much!
your extremely elaborated
and acutely kind comment
is as extraordinary beautiful as
my poem seems to be to you.
I'm humbled and rendered speechless.
Thank you so much!
Re: Dew
15th Nov 2013 8:19am
now this is an intellectual depiction of that particular display of sexual passion. the poem is beautifully crafted, the image is stimulating...
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re: Re: Dew
15th Nov 2013 7:51pm
Dear John, to call an erotic poem
an intellectual depiction [...] of sexual passion
is surely one of the most beautiful and
satisfying comments I've ever received.
Hugz!
an intellectual depiction [...] of sexual passion
is surely one of the most beautiful and
satisfying comments I've ever received.
Hugz!
Re: Dew
15th Nov 2013 10:59am
it quietly delivers, with unassuming innocence, such a wickedly powerful desire.
i envision a easy silent descent, unsheathing and - a union answered.
*shuddering*
a perfect render
i envision a easy silent descent, unsheathing and - a union answered.
*shuddering*
a perfect render
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re: Re: Dew
15th Nov 2013 8:03pm
Your shudder is the
honey-sweet reward
for the risk of publicly exposing
my sexual fantasies :-).
Your comment is so poetical.
Thank you.
honey-sweet reward
for the risk of publicly exposing
my sexual fantasies :-).
Your comment is so poetical.
Thank you.
Re: Dew
Anonymous
15th Nov 2013 9:47pm
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15th Nov 2013 10:04pm
Confess! It's only the 'bilabial'
that turns you on :-)!
Thank you kindly
for reading me, Gabriel!
that turns you on :-)!
Thank you kindly
for reading me, Gabriel!
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17th Nov 2013 8:43pm
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17th Nov 2013 9:02pm
Re: Dew
19th Nov 2013 3:45pm
Your lust settles like dew on my lips- fav line
Great write sweets!!
Love the flow!!Ink On sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write sweets!!
Love the flow!!Ink On sweets!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Dew
19th Nov 2013 3:56pm
Your fav line is mine, too :-).
Thank you so much for your
kind response, Sir Lancelott!
Thank you so much for your
kind response, Sir Lancelott!
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19th Nov 2013 10:00pm
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19th Nov 2013 10:07pm
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Re: Dew
1st Dec 2013 2:26pm
sensual writing
you nailed it
not easy to do
but when it works, it's like soft summer rain
beautiful writing
you nailed it
not easy to do
but when it works, it's like soft summer rain
beautiful writing
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Apr 2023 8:45pm
6th Dec 2013 3:23pm
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6th Dec 2013 3:36pm
*smile* I'm glad you find this piece sexy
and please admit, it's nice to be teased,
isn't it?
and please admit, it's nice to be teased,
isn't it?