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surrender
I surrender....
Your every touch, your every need
I will deliver.
With moistened lips
Head tilted high
I gulp, eyes widen with greed
I kneel, control is all mine!
The promise of excitement
Sets bodies alight
Lips causing delicious friction
A delectable delight.
Carnal desire looks down
Back arched
Groaning, hips thrusting with desire
A deep wet cavern
Accepts loaded arousal
Eyes meet
Pleasure was not denied!
Your every touch, your every need
I will deliver.
With moistened lips
Head tilted high
I gulp, eyes widen with greed
I kneel, control is all mine!
The promise of excitement
Sets bodies alight
Lips causing delicious friction
A delectable delight.
Carnal desire looks down
Back arched
Groaning, hips thrusting with desire
A deep wet cavern
Accepts loaded arousal
Eyes meet
Pleasure was not denied!
Published 13th Nov 2013
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13th Nov 2013 10:21pm
13th Nov 2013 10:47pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2013 10:26pm
donnareadle,
Nice how you passed the control back and forth, through "moistened lips" to "deep wet cavern". ; )
Enjoyed!
tornado
Nice how you passed the control back and forth, through "moistened lips" to "deep wet cavern". ; )
Enjoyed!
tornado
13th Nov 2013 10:49pm
19th Nov 2013 8:55pm
Very picturesque words that evoke feeling, stimulation and.......
....always a kiss for luck : )
Great stuff
....always a kiss for luck : )
Great stuff
19th Nov 2013 9:29pm
