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Super Hero
How do I feel?
I love you to pieces.
When I'm around you
My torment increases.
Eyes puffed and bloodshot
my mind in a whirl
Father and daughter
I was your little girl.
Years come and go
Sedated you remain.
Through the pills and the pipes
you corrupted your brain.
You dwell in Euphoria
I reside in a mess
Out of all heartache
you were my best.
If only there was
something that I could do.
Daddy, please help me
I need to save you...
I love you to pieces.
When I'm around you
My torment increases.
Eyes puffed and bloodshot
my mind in a whirl
Father and daughter
I was your little girl.
Years come and go
Sedated you remain.
Through the pills and the pipes
you corrupted your brain.
You dwell in Euphoria
I reside in a mess
Out of all heartache
you were my best.
If only there was
something that I could do.
Daddy, please help me
I need to save you...
Published 25th Jan 2011
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this is good it has the fear and hope of losing a loved one but the need/desire to save them. keep it up
25th Jan 2011 2:35pm
This was a lovely read, very endearing. I have real trouble with illness and such things as I've never had to endure that yet myself. It's a beautiful piece though and I thought the rhymes weren't too obvious, the lines were simply and precise.
Why is it extreme content though? Don't understand that one but other than that it is good.
Why is it extreme content though? Don't understand that one but other than that it is good.
26th Jan 2011 5:00am
Not quite sure, I think I clicked the wrong button lol. Thank you so much!
3rd Mar 2011 00:13am
