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Amazing
How dexterously you prune
the thorny thicket of my
withered trust.
Dont you dare
mistake me
for the Sleeping Beauty!
the thorny thicket of my
withered trust.
Dont you dare
mistake me
for the Sleeping Beauty!
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Re: Amazing
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Nov 2013 9:28pm
11th Nov 2013 9:14pm
Miss Chi,
And we all know how hard it is to find a thorny thicket pruner who is dexterous! ; ) Love the way you rode in from withered, pulling the reigns tight, pawing at the air with your bold front! Enjoyed!
tornado
And we all know how hard it is to find a thorny thicket pruner who is dexterous! ; ) Love the way you rode in from withered, pulling the reigns tight, pawing at the air with your bold front! Enjoyed!
tornado
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re: Re: Amazing
Uhhhhhhh ... they are among us
the skilled ones, the sedulous
liberators of sleeping Amazons!!!
You carried the story a little forward!
Thanks for that and your
welcome and lovely comment, torn-a-do!
the skilled ones, the sedulous
liberators of sleeping Amazons!!!
You carried the story a little forward!
Thanks for that and your
welcome and lovely comment, torn-a-do!
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Anonymous
11th Nov 2013 10:06pm
...may I add a hearty thumbs up! LOL!!!
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Re: Amazing
Anonymous
11th Nov 2013 9:27pm
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re: Re: Amazing
11th Nov 2013 9:32pm
Thank you Gabriel!
I'm so glad you
penetrated and enjoyed
the thicket of my metaphors :-).
I'm so glad you
penetrated and enjoyed
the thicket of my metaphors :-).
Re: Amazing
11th Nov 2013 10:42pm
Prince Charming, I think,
would fall back under his
rock, the seedy little
womaniser..:)
would fall back under his
rock, the seedy little
womaniser..:)
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re: Re: Amazing
12th Nov 2013 7:58am
Hahaha!
Yes, he would, Paul! Definitely!
I realize that this
little poem has you men
a bit shaken up?
Yes, he would, Paul! Definitely!
I realize that this
little poem has you men
a bit shaken up?
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12th Nov 2013 10:26pm
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Re: Amazing
11th Nov 2013 10:48pm
Ouch! That hurts! lol
a bold proclamation my sexy lil sweetness :)
Excellent 'barb' :)
a bold proclamation my sexy lil sweetness :)
Excellent 'barb' :)
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re: Re: Amazing
12th Nov 2013 8:00am
Well, as a skilled
pruner you probably wouldn't
be hurt much :-).
The "excellent barb" is
somehow awesome. Love it, Poe!
pruner you probably wouldn't
be hurt much :-).
The "excellent barb" is
somehow awesome. Love it, Poe!
Re: Amazing
12th Nov 2013 1:08am
you're a confident woman, Chi. I admire assertive women, & also sleeping beauties...
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re: Re: Amazing
12th Nov 2013 8:09am
Factum est
that some men admire
assertive women but rather
chose the sleeping beauties
since they're easier to handle.
So only the "bad boys"
would come into consideration
for female kickboxing motorcyclists, hehe.
Thanks to you for your kind comment, John!
that some men admire
assertive women but rather
chose the sleeping beauties
since they're easier to handle.
So only the "bad boys"
would come into consideration
for female kickboxing motorcyclists, hehe.
Thanks to you for your kind comment, John!
Anonymous
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12th Nov 2013 1:47am
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re: Re: Amazing
12th Nov 2013 8:11am
Yessssss, although
he's armed with prunes
the thorny thicket
leaves its marks :-)
Thank you, lonelyvoyager, for
your lovely remark!
he's armed with prunes
the thorny thicket
leaves its marks :-)
Thank you, lonelyvoyager, for
your lovely remark!
Re: Amazing
Anonymous
12th Nov 2013 2:10am
Strong women are so sexy..hehe
You tell 'em Chi, take no prisoners!
I love it :)
You tell 'em Chi, take no prisoners!
I love it :)
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re: Re: Amazing
Prisoners have to be fed
so death's the only option :-).
Oh no, just joking!
Thanks for the "sexy" and
the strong comment, Tom!
so death's the only option :-).
Oh no, just joking!
Thanks for the "sexy" and
the strong comment, Tom!
Re: Amazing
12th Nov 2013 5:59pm
I was raised by a mother who was tough & assertive. A bare-knuckle brawler, a mountain woman. That set a major precedent for the rest of my life when it comes to women. I admire the thorns as much as I admire the rose. I would never mistake you for a Sleeping Beauty, Chiyo! Very cool lil poem...hits me right HERE!
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Ah, Ben! I think I'd like your mother if I knew her! What made me into the person who I am is rather a sad story. But it surely left me STRONG instead of broken. Thank you so much for your kind words! Hey, where did the poem hit you? I apologize! Nasty little thing!
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13th Nov 2013 00:03am
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Re: Amazing
14th Nov 2013 8:20pm
with poems like this, I may
just prune back my other reading
so as to enjoy more of yours...
just prune back my other reading
so as to enjoy more of yours...
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re: Re: Amazing
14th Nov 2013 8:32pm
J., I'm so very humbled
by your sweet comment!
Thank you so much! But
unfortunately I do not
produce in series so
you will have to span
the time gap doing
other things but to read!
But hey! Totally sweet!
by your sweet comment!
Thank you so much! But
unfortunately I do not
produce in series so
you will have to span
the time gap doing
other things but to read!
But hey! Totally sweet!
Re: Amazing
Nothing shaken Ms Chi. Although definitely stirred. Strength of women a very admirable trait in a world of TV waifs. You have a way. I am so glad that you do. Thank you Ms Chi.
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re: Re: Amazing
16th Jan 2014 7:14pm
If you don't stand up for yourself, nobody else will. Strength is something that saved my life. As yours, too. Thank you, Twitch, you always find so touching words for my poems.