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Your words have a very heavy feel to them...they kinda hurt.(nice write) :)

I was trying to portray how angry she was at the choices made that brought her to the place she is now. Thanks for your insight Hashman.
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Wow! You betrayed a story that had me glued in. A good way, in my opinion of meeting someone online. For online, people can become whomever they want to be, instead of the person who they truly are. To bad the one who come in with good intentions have to find out the hard way. Great piece of sliced and diced ink!

Thanks for your insight ElBaby. It is a shame that there is the dishonesty on the internet and some people learn the hard way. I think more people are clued up about things now. There are genuine ones thou.
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Yes sadly all too common
Spoils it for the genuine ones
Makes others too cautious
Things usually dont get off the ground
It's the world we live in unfortunately

Great scribe to a all to real problem

By becoming too cautious people start to become someone they're not by concealing their true self. The dishonesty begins then spirals out of control and the choices we make hurt and can damage lives.
Thanks for reading Rose  
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yes agreed SH
favourable concealment up to a point is commendable
and in this day in age with unscrupulous people male or females taping away in darkened rooms while wives or husbands are out
always found being truthful helps
saves agonising appologise later down the line
that can taint friendships

i have found men are the main culprits
very chatty and charming till push comes to shove then sinister intent revealed or the "oh you got me all wrong" "thats not what I desire i'm married" "oh didn't I say"  then crest fallen or worse stalked invading your own space
its tricky to navigate  truly it is

I watched a film about this topic awhile back and it's now a tv show. Seriously an eye opener.
Appreciating the feedback Rose
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I read this with such a heavy heart. so often true, when what they say changes the closer reality comes...

I'm sure you are not alone Petit_Minou. The connections online are intensified tenfold and we all know how powerful words can be. Remember the rush the connection gave and know that it can happen for real someday.
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Great piece sweets!!!
Awesome write and read!!!


Sir Lancelott

Thanks Sir Lancelott
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yip this is the new space too many find themselves in all caught up..loved the solid strong style

Thank you for your insight feenixfiles
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Been there...

This piece moved me deeply!