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Climax
climax
reaching climax
pounding hearts
now together
once apart
slippery sliding
in and out
rubbing kissing
moan and shout
your feelings
your desires
now we're sharing
passion's fires
in exploding
ecstasy
minds and bodies
here set free -
reaching climax
pounding hearts
we are one
no more apart -
reaching climax
pounding hearts
now together
once apart
slippery sliding
in and out
rubbing kissing
moan and shout
your feelings
your desires
now we're sharing
passion's fires
in exploding
ecstasy
minds and bodies
here set free -
reaching climax
pounding hearts
we are one
no more apart -
Published 10th Nov 2013
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2013 10:22pm
First of all, welcome to DU! Second of all, good structure and rhyme scheme. Quite sexy with a hint of romance. Well done.
31st Oct 2018 6:25pm
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