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Just Don’t Die
Clinging to the hand of a vegetative loved one
Praying for a miracle
Slipping further and further into denial
Still thinking the day will come
Begging for more time
It comes from the right place
But holy fuck is it wrong
A sick life
When quantity is so valued
Regardless of quality
Decay, Rot, and Suffer- Just don’t die
Praying for a miracle
Slipping further and further into denial
Still thinking the day will come
Begging for more time
It comes from the right place
But holy fuck is it wrong
A sick life
When quantity is so valued
Regardless of quality
Decay, Rot, and Suffer- Just don’t die
Published 10th Nov 2013
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10th Nov 2013 4:00am
14th Nov 2013 6:30pm
Had to look up the definition of succinct, you have a large word bank. I told you work brings out a lot of writing. Thanks for the words
