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What did you just say?
Talk to me before I sleep
Tell me a story
starting from when you recall, to now,
sure I expect some parts to be breezed over
but know it to be true that I want to know
you complete.
I promise I will not linger on your every word
or interrupt too many times, but I do have
questions,
I'll also try not to distract you by running
my fingers through that gorgeous chest hair,
ok, I'm saying sorry in advance with the chest
hair distracting thing, but I am trying honest..
I can be good..
though,
I expect you like the naughty me too.
Lets talk into the night, forgetting about the time,
just you and me on our flying carpet, that just so
happens to transform into our bed, how cool is that!.
Lets be open with opinions and respect each others
wishes and dreams, as we talk of places we'd like to
visit, to places we'd like to live in the future.
Lets laugh and play fight as we still try to understand
each others lingo, that'll end up with us making love,
thankfully we understand this universal act well.
Hmm chest hair, no, no, we just covered that, sorry.
Lets lay together and speak of love, whilst creating
a future for us all, somehow.
Tell me a story
starting from when you recall, to now,
sure I expect some parts to be breezed over
but know it to be true that I want to know
you complete.
I promise I will not linger on your every word
or interrupt too many times, but I do have
questions,
I'll also try not to distract you by running
my fingers through that gorgeous chest hair,
ok, I'm saying sorry in advance with the chest
hair distracting thing, but I am trying honest..
I can be good..
though,
I expect you like the naughty me too.
Lets talk into the night, forgetting about the time,
just you and me on our flying carpet, that just so
happens to transform into our bed, how cool is that!.
Lets be open with opinions and respect each others
wishes and dreams, as we talk of places we'd like to
visit, to places we'd like to live in the future.
Lets laugh and play fight as we still try to understand
each others lingo, that'll end up with us making love,
thankfully we understand this universal act well.
Hmm chest hair, no, no, we just covered that, sorry.
Lets lay together and speak of love, whilst creating
a future for us all, somehow.
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re: Re: What did you just say?
6th Nov 2013 9:53pm
Re: What did you just say?
Anonymous
6th Nov 2013 9:45pm
..it would seem with all the chest hair, she won't have any trouble keeping it up! ; ) Like the whole idea of the running thought....yes, I think you about covered it all! Enjoyed!
tornado
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6th Nov 2013 9:53pm
Re: What did you just say?
6th Nov 2013 9:56pm
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6th Nov 2013 10:00pm
Re: What did you just say?
This is a fun piece. I can feel the sweet, sensual tension that accompanies the words.
This passage is really fun:
"Lets talk into the night, forgetting about the time,
just you and me on our flying carpet, that just so
happens to transform into our bed, how cool is that! :)
The pic is mysterious...explain!
This passage is really fun:
"Lets talk into the night, forgetting about the time,
just you and me on our flying carpet, that just so
happens to transform into our bed, how cool is that! :)
The pic is mysterious...explain!
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re: Re: What did you just say?
6th Nov 2013 10:27pm
Toys designed for pillow fighting
Can actually buy these lol
Wasn't what I was looking for
(Two people play fighting)
But these weapons" caught my eye
XD
Can actually buy these lol
Wasn't what I was looking for
(Two people play fighting)
But these weapons" caught my eye
XD
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Oh funny guy xD
Can you do stand up?
Stand up and I'll hit you with
Stuffed axe. . XD
Fight you for that axe
And keep that sword sheathed. .
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7th Nov 2013 8:16am
I am a firm believer in safe stuffed sword fights so of course i'll keep it sheathed. However, I cannot be held responsible for a broken sheath :)
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7th Nov 2013 9:46am
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2013 7:23am
Sweet and beautiful bit of togetherness. Loved reading it...
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7th Nov 2013 7:46am
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Anonymous
7th Nov 2013 2:32pm
This entire piece, stanza by stanza is so beautiful, Poet. You're killing me softly though..writing my Liebestraum..:)
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7th Nov 2013 3:39pm
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24th Dec 2013 1:24pm
I floated. Then smiled some. Floated a little more. Smiled again. Really very sweet Rose. Thank you Miss.
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24th Dec 2013 1:35pm