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Broken
I look into the mirror, into my eyes
I feel as if I'm looking into nothing
Just a shell, no hopes, no dreams, no soul
Tired, pale face that says my will is broken
Like looking at a walking corpse
No spark remains
Bled out everything for others
Not once, thinking of myself
Gave a part of myself to everyone
Until I had nothing left
Scars left me cold and numb
Incapable of loving again
I feel as if I'm looking into nothing
Just a shell, no hopes, no dreams, no soul
Tired, pale face that says my will is broken
Like looking at a walking corpse
No spark remains
Bled out everything for others
Not once, thinking of myself
Gave a part of myself to everyone
Until I had nothing left
Scars left me cold and numb
Incapable of loving again
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Re: Broken
4th Nov 2013 5:31am
Truely amazing poetry.!! Every word spoke to me. Its a struggle but, fight for yoursrelf believe your worth it . Life is what you make it. Trust me I know cause im learning the hard way.
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4th Nov 2013 9:37am
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4th Nov 2013 9:39am
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4th Nov 2013 12:12pm
Well, glad I could make someone feel my pain. Thanks for the read and comment, Crim.
Flattered :)
Flattered :)
Re: Broken
4th Nov 2013 5:10pm
A very moving piece and well compose.
I've felt like that before, always giving, and then granted with ungratefulness...
Great Write!
Darker
I've felt like that before, always giving, and then granted with ungratefulness...
Great Write!
Darker
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