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come rain.
when the day stops raining
and i stop crying.
il be a different girl
but we all no thats not going to happen
its been a year with out rain
a year with out you .
and i stop crying.
il be a different girl
but we all no thats not going to happen
its been a year with out rain
a year with out you .
Published 22nd Jan 2011
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30th Jan 2011 00:39am
try your best to check what you write. The typos are endless, and it makes it hard for the reader to not jump straight for the throat. il is I'll, no is know, with out is one word. Correct things like this, that way the reader gets the impression you at least know language even if the fire isn't there just yet.
30th Jan 2011 6:45am
i dont really care just as long as ppl understand and have been in that situation and kno what im talking bout.
