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Awkward Moment Of Success
That awkward moment when...
You proudly hit send, quietly chuffed with your funny smart arse Bel reply.
But all isn't so,
Eager to see the finished product in its glory,
I scroll up....
Feeling not so smart after I realise Id already sent my reply. In fact, I had my own reply. And in turn, I had now replied to this.
And there it stood, it made a statement alright.
The wrong statement.
A Strang statement
A statement about ants and questioning their sugar eating habits.
Alas I sat in a sigh of failure
Feeling quite the fool
Until it dawned upon me
Admittedly took me by surprise at first, but then that's the workings of a brilliant mind.
It hit me like an energy ball, when it all made sense, when it Became clear as day to see.
Infact my earlier fumble, had indeed fumbled into a fortune. This material was classic. in a awkward kind a way.
Belinda Boys
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You proudly hit send, quietly chuffed with your funny smart arse Bel reply.
But all isn't so,
Eager to see the finished product in its glory,
I scroll up....
Feeling not so smart after I realise Id already sent my reply. In fact, I had my own reply. And in turn, I had now replied to this.
And there it stood, it made a statement alright.
The wrong statement.
A Strang statement
A statement about ants and questioning their sugar eating habits.
Alas I sat in a sigh of failure
Feeling quite the fool
Until it dawned upon me
Admittedly took me by surprise at first, but then that's the workings of a brilliant mind.
It hit me like an energy ball, when it all made sense, when it Became clear as day to see.
Infact my earlier fumble, had indeed fumbled into a fortune. This material was classic. in a awkward kind a way.
Belinda Boys
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