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Star crossed ( repost & edit)
The night the stars came out to play,
beneath the moon we chose to lay..
Side by side our hands entwined,
star gazing together, our smiles combined.
Clear, like the nights sky our love broke through,
across the fields with grazing cows, to find, me and you.
You took my heart that very night,
when you whispered I love you,
On the breeze,
no one in sight,
accompanied by a moo or two
You squeezed my hand,
I needed that touch,
our thoughts were in tune,
It all seemed too much..
My tears were waiting,
right on cue,
side by side,
Under the stars,
Is where I whispered,
I love you too.
beneath the moon we chose to lay..
Side by side our hands entwined,
star gazing together, our smiles combined.
Clear, like the nights sky our love broke through,
across the fields with grazing cows, to find, me and you.
You took my heart that very night,
when you whispered I love you,
On the breeze,
no one in sight,
accompanied by a moo or two
You squeezed my hand,
I needed that touch,
our thoughts were in tune,
It all seemed too much..
My tears were waiting,
right on cue,
side by side,
Under the stars,
Is where I whispered,
I love you too.
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Re: Star crossed ( repost & edit)
30th Oct 2013 9:22pm
No romantic scene is really complete if not
"accompanied by a moo or two"
This is beautiful Rose...I love the classic pic too.
"accompanied by a moo or two"
This is beautiful Rose...I love the classic pic too.
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31st Oct 2013 5:37am
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31st Oct 2013 7:36am
haha@gahddess very true
if some guy said MoooOO! whilst they were "peaking with me..well lets just say that would send me into infinity and beyond thats for sure hehe
if some guy said MoooOO! whilst they were "peaking with me..well lets just say that would send me into infinity and beyond thats for sure hehe
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31st Oct 2013 7:39am
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31st Oct 2013 7:42am
yeah i noticed..
not quite infinity and beyond
maybe to the door of the bedroom
its a start
its the taking part that counts
i guess
not quite infinity and beyond
maybe to the door of the bedroom
its a start
its the taking part that counts
i guess
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1st Nov 2013 6:50am
Ah. A romantic night on the countryside. The stars are much brighter out here in the boonies. No Super Wal Marts or stadiums or skyscrapers to block those heavenly views. It does seem like too much...like too good to be true, but if you can have even one taste, you'll never forget it. & it has been known to happen, & last. It seems to be a bygone thing, though, situations like this. Thanks for the rural tranquility, Rose. Never mind those cow patties...you can get used to that. A blanket of open sky is the best :)
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