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Stay away
(To be and what not to be
That isn't a question
at least not to me )
I'll say what I want
When I want to whom I want
because I can
no mother fucker owns me
don't even preach to me
if someone wants to drag my name in the mud
you think I should stay quiet?
Yeah ok!
go bang your ankles in any possible way you can
because no one can take my word or my name from me
it's all we little people have lived on
and the haters
they love the weak
they feed off of it
it gives them the high they can't get out of life
worthless to anyone
but themselves
and even then they still cry at night
for the friends they never had
Never will have
the love of just the person that birth you
is all you need
right?
then get the fuck away from me
That isn't a question
at least not to me )
I'll say what I want
When I want to whom I want
because I can
no mother fucker owns me
don't even preach to me
if someone wants to drag my name in the mud
you think I should stay quiet?
Yeah ok!
go bang your ankles in any possible way you can
because no one can take my word or my name from me
it's all we little people have lived on
and the haters
they love the weak
they feed off of it
it gives them the high they can't get out of life
worthless to anyone
but themselves
and even then they still cry at night
for the friends they never had
Never will have
the love of just the person that birth you
is all you need
right?
then get the fuck away from me
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re: Re: Stay away
29th Oct 2013 11:31pm
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Alright Gg fierce raw anger very justified.. I love who you are!!! peace Crim
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re: Re: Stay away
29th Oct 2013 11:50pm
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2013 1:06am
Sometimes a show of strength is all that's needed. And you have that...
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30th Oct 2013 6:28am
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30th Oct 2013 11:31am
I have difficulty reading blatant rants as poetry...[even when I do it myself]....even at my worst, I have to find some kind of transcendence, or irony, or humor, or something other than adding another 'I hate...' to an already sick collective consciousness, but quite obviously that perspective is one of some unvast minority & not at all popular....
g'odd he'p US all
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Re: Stay away
1st Nov 2013 8:42pm
Go bang your ankles in way you can.. That's not hurtful enough Gigi. How about a more lyrical way of saying 'tug on that zipper until it's amputated' I'm with you on this, my tempers short these days.
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2nd Nov 2013 00:28am
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3rd Nov 2013 2:43am
I like your tone in this. there are plenty of good ppl to drink&party with. ignore the bad...
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3rd Nov 2013 3:27am
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21st Jan 2014 10:39am
lol "go bang your ankles" lol funny image there. I just love this tone and attitude it well written and awesome.
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Re: Stay away
28th Oct 2014 2:31am
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2014 9:00pm
Love it.. Couldn't have said it better myself..
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