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Death Emotion
What is that last emotion, that dieing feeling is it fear or is the last emotion what your loved ones feel when your gone,is the feeling warm? perhaps so warm that it burns,yes that rotten feeling what is the last emotion that people call because of pain is it a emptyness a void for you to walk in watching others mourn you would you feel remorce for them?what would be could be the last emotion be...Confusion
Published 21st Jan 2011
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9th Jun 2011 8:04pm
omitting all the important details here, i came extremely close to dying once. was convinced i was from the moment everything faded away until i woke up the next day in a puddle of blood. my last 'emotion' was peace. when i was sure that it was all over, that earthly pollution of mind and body were behind me, that mundane pain was obsolete, i felt a very real but almost phantom happiness.
the last emotion before dying is probably of some accord to the life that's ending. a happier man than me would probably have not walked so graciously into the supreme unknown.
the last emotion before dying is probably of some accord to the life that's ending. a happier man than me would probably have not walked so graciously into the supreme unknown.
