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hate me
hate me
kick me
hit me
beat me
slave me
hate me
hate me
hurt me
tear me
save me
change me
hate me
hate me
kiss me
taste me
breathe me
feel me
hate me
hate me
touch me
know me
take me
heal me
hate me
hate me
hate me
kick me
hit me
beat me
slave me
hate me
hate me
hurt me
tear me
save me
change me
hate me
hate me
kiss me
taste me
breathe me
feel me
hate me
hate me
touch me
know me
take me
heal me
hate me
hate me
Published 20th Jan 2011
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22nd Jan 2011 5:46am
22nd Jan 2011 6:57am
I enjoyed the flow, but if I may offer a suggestion regarding the, Hate me, Hate me
It may flow better using. Hate me, Hit me, Hold me, Take me, Love me.
Just a thought.
It may flow better using. Hate me, Hit me, Hold me, Take me, Love me.
Just a thought.
