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Inner Temple...
the effigy of a
knight, palms
pressed together,
a dog at
his feet,
laid out in
stone on the
floor of the
church, I swear I
heard him
groan and
saw him lurch
towards the
door...
Published 27th Oct 2013
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27th Oct 2013 2:26am
I will simply say I like this very much- I especially like how your 'title's tell'
27th Oct 2013 2:57am
Have you been to the Temple
Church? It has a feeling of
quiet desperation....
Church? It has a feeling of
quiet desperation....
27th Oct 2013 1:28pm
Very pictorial, Paul.
Our Inner Temples -
densely populated by
strange and unrecognized
figures.
Our Inner Temples -
densely populated by
strange and unrecognized
figures.
27th Oct 2013 7:26pm
anymore, nearly every church I've visited,
or even pass by,
seems screaming of
Quiet Desparation
our 'collective spirit', 'collective soul', or call it 'karma'(which no one owns, yet wee all think wee own it), is such as Sad place----but
it's always someone else's Belief that is at folly....never occurs to anyone that Believing AnyThing Wee Think 'Is' thee hubris/folly that is choking us all.......
ain't that per'found? eh? huh? No wonder stone dog was tryin t'make for thee door......
great write, even if it was a Long one...juskiddin,kid.
