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That room...I remember
Tinkles and poo
would be the purpose of this room
but there was something else
the lingering smell of the "special" ciggarettes
The revamped, remodeled, and rehashed mechanicals shells
of a
4 inch television.
It shared it's life with you...
I remember the ash tray--perched on the window sill
a sill always open
I remember the aftershave brush that sat in the cabinet
with the aroma of spices and oldness
I remember...
and I miss those moments of past.
would be the purpose of this room
but there was something else
the lingering smell of the "special" ciggarettes
The revamped, remodeled, and rehashed mechanicals shells
of a
4 inch television.
It shared it's life with you...
I remember the ash tray--perched on the window sill
a sill always open
I remember the aftershave brush that sat in the cabinet
with the aroma of spices and oldness
I remember...
and I miss those moments of past.
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re: Re: That room...I remember
30th Oct 2013 4:40pm
Re: That room...I remember
30th Oct 2013 12:49pm
Oh wow, this is endearing! You penned
A somewhat melancholic piece here my sweet lady :)
A somewhat melancholic piece here my sweet lady :)
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Re: That room...I remember
30th Oct 2013 4:41pm
Re: That room...I remember
31st Oct 2013 2:35am
I have a penchant or curse of thinking about poetry in musical terms. When I finished this it very much reminded me of a Paul Simon classic, penned while he was working with Art.
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re: Re: That room...I remember
31st Oct 2013 12:33pm
You are not cursed but blessed in your musical thinkings!! thanks for the read!
Re: That room...I remember
4th Nov 2013 6:37pm
...superb description of imagery, niknshell!:)
I love this piece! Great read luv....Xo
I love this piece! Great read luv....Xo
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Re: That room...I remember
5th Nov 2013 3:35pm
Hi sweets long time huh?
Great lil piece sweets!!
Love the read!
Ink On!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great lil piece sweets!!
Love the read!
Ink On!!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: That room...I remember
5th Nov 2013 3:51pm
Re: That room...I remember
Anonymous
20th Dec 2013 2:11am
Smells, taste, touch, sights and sounds can all trigger wonderful memories or horrible recall..this one is a lovely write about a lovely memory. Thanks for sharing :)
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re: Re: That room...I remember
20th Dec 2013 1:02pm