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why he hates when it shines.....
your shadow is so
dark and deeper dark I see
when sunlight haunts me...
Published 20th Oct 2013
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21st Oct 2013 2:54am
As light is the counterbalance to the darkness, so often the brightness, of our own 'hope light'--sadly--makes us more aware of the sorrow of another....or perhaps the more sinister side?
Such Insightful Ink, my Friend! :)
Soo many facets to your own creative imagination, as well!
Such Insightful Ink, my Friend! :)
Soo many facets to your own creative imagination, as well!
21st Oct 2013 5:47am
21st Oct 2013 3:13pm
"overmuch light is
blindness..soothe me in thee deep
shade of your noir love" -----
~dkzkanonymost/c20th'21stCent~
i'magine that....love yr dart-sharp concision
21st Oct 2013 8:23pm
Because of the light -
your vision gets soothed
by the shadow ...
Deep and dark, Paul.
your vision gets soothed
by the shadow ...
Deep and dark, Paul.
Anonymous
22nd Oct 2013 2:17am
Between light and dark we face the truth, for what it is.
Dark and thoughtful, i had to read it twice to get the feel.
Dark and thoughtful, i had to read it twice to get the feel.
