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Free from you...
You have released me from your prison...
I feel as though a weight has risen...
A weight that shackled my soul...
I will no longer have to bare your Insults...
Or listen to your hateful rants...
Or feel the pain...
The pain you gave me constantly....
I am free...
But yet I still feel sad...
Because of the way you treated me so bad...
But I no longer have to suffer...
I am so very glad...
I feel as though a weight has risen...
A weight that shackled my soul...
I will no longer have to bare your Insults...
Or listen to your hateful rants...
Or feel the pain...
The pain you gave me constantly....
I am free...
But yet I still feel sad...
Because of the way you treated me so bad...
But I no longer have to suffer...
I am so very glad...
Published 19th Oct 2013
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19th Oct 2013 8:01pm
Seems your soul's unshackled.
That's of most importance.
To be sad
for a while
is not as bad
as living behind
humanly bars.
Very well penned!
That's of most importance.
To be sad
for a while
is not as bad
as living behind
humanly bars.
Very well penned!
19th Oct 2013 8:20pm
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19th Oct 2013 10:08pm
Anonymous
19th Oct 2013 8:41pm
Good style choice with the ellipses. I liked the rhyme scheme. Well done.
19th Oct 2013 10:10pm
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