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Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
What to do when the magic is so fleeting
when you create but then it is lost
leaves you numb
thinking oh what a cost
When what you write seems so perfect
but a mistake is made
didn't start with a hard copy
and even in seconds the memory fades
Try to start again with the words you were using
but it just doesn't seem to be right
sloppy and uninspiring the second shot
racks the brain all through the night
So I say to those who have to compose
a copy that is more durable is a must
hate to see the care and time you take
amount to nothing more then dust!
when you create but then it is lost
leaves you numb
thinking oh what a cost
When what you write seems so perfect
but a mistake is made
didn't start with a hard copy
and even in seconds the memory fades
Try to start again with the words you were using
but it just doesn't seem to be right
sloppy and uninspiring the second shot
racks the brain all through the night
So I say to those who have to compose
a copy that is more durable is a must
hate to see the care and time you take
amount to nothing more then dust!
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Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
16th Oct 2013 5:38pm
a hard copy is sometimes the best. I learned that the hard way when I started writing my own songs. still have a hard time reading the notes but a hard is the best. good write, I enjoyed
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16th Oct 2013 5:52pm
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16th Oct 2013 5:57pm
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16th Oct 2013 8:12pm
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
16th Oct 2013 6:19pm
Sloppy and uninspiring makes me toss the whole thing. I won't write for the sake of writing. I need to have a relationship with my ink...
Pen Love~
Pen Love~
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
16th Oct 2013 8:14pm
the point I was trying to make is that I wrote something, didn't have a hard copy and when I tried to do it again, I wasn't able to recreate it to the point where I liked it as much.
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16th Oct 2013 8:40pm
Yes, I understood the point of this ink. Sorry if I took a line from the piece and ran with it, but that stanza stood out to me and I couldn't help but comment on it. Xo
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16th Oct 2013 8:46pm
never mind watching a pretty lady run although I will never figure out how you gals do that in heels!
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Oct 2013 6:32pm
16th Oct 2013 6:31pm
Done this more times that I can remember. I always have at least a paper and pen on me now...
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
16th Oct 2013 8:17pm
well I can't say all the time...just doesn't work with curious daycare children who will use up the pen ink, leave the top off, or scribble on the paper.
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
16th Oct 2013 7:51pm
Oooh I lost a whole notebook of poems before. I felt as if I had writers block. Now I save them in multiple locations. Great poem
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
before getting my laptop, I too had a collection of poems. I have no idea where it is now (probably in a box that has yet to be opened)
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16th Oct 2013 8:56pm
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16th Oct 2013 11:29pm
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
Anonymous
17th Oct 2013 2:36am
great point JazzMAN! I lose it all the time :/ usually when I'm walking
i carry my smart phone and send myself a voice msg..lol
i carry my smart phone and send myself a voice msg..lol
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
17th Oct 2013 8:31am
on the other hand maybe we shouldn't be concerned---after all attempts to rectify the problem my be at the expense of privacy which has already been reduced in the wake of 9/11
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
17th Oct 2013 11:23am
Aaahhh yup I know this well!
I have talked many times with my two younger bros. Who both also write... That some of the best stuff I ever wrote
Is lost in my head lol, I'm horrible at using a pen n paper
nowadays, I used to do it all the time, but I'm a 'tech head'
it's as jf I MUST have it digitized lol, at the same time, becuz I'm also an artist (of pen, pencil, n brush) when I have paper
That's what I'm inclined to do, DRAW! lol
doesn't bother me too much losing an ink,
I ink totally 'in the moment' of thought anyways :)
I have talked many times with my two younger bros. Who both also write... That some of the best stuff I ever wrote
Is lost in my head lol, I'm horrible at using a pen n paper
nowadays, I used to do it all the time, but I'm a 'tech head'
it's as jf I MUST have it digitized lol, at the same time, becuz I'm also an artist (of pen, pencil, n brush) when I have paper
That's what I'm inclined to do, DRAW! lol
doesn't bother me too much losing an ink,
I ink totally 'in the moment' of thought anyways :)
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
18th Oct 2013 2:26am
Wow...it always fascinates me how people create things! I appreciate you sharing you typical method of "creativity"!
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
17th Oct 2013 10:18pm
...same with music eh?
how many times things lost...and somehow it is always the most inspired of Writes...Grrrrr
too true Jazz-Excellent Sir!!!
how many times things lost...and somehow it is always the most inspired of Writes...Grrrrr
too true Jazz-Excellent Sir!!!
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
18th Oct 2013 2:32am
yes, I remember a very brief period of time after undergrad days when a friend and I were contemplating a band which would focus on our own songs. A chord or a note in a sequence that I never felt like I could replicate again...At least the songs that I wrote all by myself I did record on a tiny tape player.
Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
17th Oct 2013 11:00pm
Some do have sloppy writes but it's what they feel at the moment, which doesn't take from the creativity, as long as it make sense to them. Understand your view though.
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re: Re: Dear Poets! (The Most Important Thing I Can Share)
18th Oct 2013 2:35am
Sometimes it isn't sloppy but rather being able replicate all the words in the original and falling, which makes me feel like some important essence has been lost forever...
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18th Oct 2013 5:17pm
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18th Oct 2013 8:25pm
My memory is much better at recalling what other people wrote then what I came up with!