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where I want to be...
wishing i were at a place where i know i belong. a place where pain won't hurt me anymore. please bring me to this place! i've cried so much that i can't even stand so im falling on my face begging please show me how it feels to be happy again. i wantto laugh again, i want to experience the joy that i once had before he took it away. i keep crying out, but no one hears me. so i guess ive become friends with my fate.
Published 17th Jan 2011
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17th Jan 2011 5:32am
Your poem goes to show that we all have friends even when we're alone! Even pain can be a most faithful friend, as unappreciated it may be. Your poem clarifies that we're never truly alone.
18th Jan 2011 6:11am
wow, keep on expressing yourself as u do, its refreshing to condense five hundred lines to this example of true feeling...~
