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Tes yeux (your eyes)
Tes yeux
Verts si bleus!
Je les veux
Mon cœur
Jolie comme une fleur
A la douce odeur
Sucrée et parfumée
Que j'aime humer
Sous ton nez
Si fin
Comme l’airain
A la fin!
Your eyes
Green so blue!
I want them
My heart
Pretty as a flower
A sweet smell
Sweet and perfumed
I love smelling
Under your nose
So fine
Like brass
At the end!
Published 15th Oct 2013
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15th Oct 2013 11:06pm
I appreciate, Gabi! Thank you so much...
Just a short indication : I have written in plane during a flight to Lisbon where I am now for 4 days (for my job). And I have loved to make rhymes with three stenza, funny! But I think it is not translatable, sentences are short and very hard to find the correct words.
Just a short indication : I have written in plane during a flight to Lisbon where I am now for 4 days (for my job). And I have loved to make rhymes with three stenza, funny! But I think it is not translatable, sentences are short and very hard to find the correct words.
Anonymous
15th Oct 2013 11:25pm
Romantic as ever :)
15th Oct 2013 11:36pm
Petit_Minou said about me for my poem "your eyes" (yes, it is a subject I like very well, because I love the eyes of women and my love has very beautiful eyes) :
"You are just so very ... French..."... Yes romantic as a true french poet, perhaps and I like that.
Thank you so much for your comment, Vee!
"You are just so very ... French..."... Yes romantic as a true french poet, perhaps and I like that.
Thank you so much for your comment, Vee!
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