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Your lips
Your face is, as it wrote on manuscripts
The first wonder in world, with your lips
So sensual, gorgeous, they can eclipse
The Tahaj Mahal and other... Your lips
So beautiful and attractive, sure I kiss
Them, my tongue loves them and slips
Between to caress for our courtships
Published 15th Oct 2013
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15th Oct 2013 6:45am
Wow, thoughtfully scrumptious, I must say! Haha, I love the ending, "My tongue loves them and slips between to caress for our courtships".
15th Oct 2013 6:51am
Thank you so much for your comment... Hope all is correctly written, playing with rhymes is not easy!
15th Oct 2013 1:41pm
15th Oct 2013 2:54pm
