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suicide
I lay down to die in a dark abyss stained with blood. I hear whispers of "all hope is lost". As i swollow one after another, i feel my heart rate slowing down. my vens feel like they ar about to explode, but still i go on. the sharp metal, thin as a blade, but sharp as a sword pieced my skin as i aquirm with pain. a red substance runs down my arm. is this the end? are all my troubles over? tears fill my eyes as with every stide i watch teh blood drip...drip...drip. the lable reads "pain killer", so open wide. what a drug indeed because it ended my life that night.
Published 16th Jan 2011
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16th Jan 2011 8:32am
... You basically bombarded my mind with these emotions... my god u are truly amazing good job.. cant wait to see more work from u
16th Jan 2011 2:41pm
17th Jan 2011 3:55am
you show such emotion.. your words show what i feel and could never say. i have so much respect, and love for you
