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he wrote me poetry
16 and naive.
hand holding.
blunt smoke & movies dates.
scribbling your name on my notebook.
innocent love.
My love wrote me poetry.
daddies little girl now creams .
highschool virgin becoming your whore.
Craming your big dick into me .
easing the pain reciting your poetry.
ripping away my delicate flower as I bleed.
as you thrust in and out of me .
until you explode
you pull out of me .
A virgin no more
Thanks to your poetry
hand holding.
blunt smoke & movies dates.
scribbling your name on my notebook.
innocent love.
My love wrote me poetry.
daddies little girl now creams .
highschool virgin becoming your whore.
Craming your big dick into me .
easing the pain reciting your poetry.
ripping away my delicate flower as I bleed.
as you thrust in and out of me .
until you explode
you pull out of me .
A virgin no more
Thanks to your poetry
Published 14th Oct 2013
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14th Oct 2013 4:23am
That is one powerfully worded poem, & a helluva transition. It can happen faster than we anticipate. My poetry was never charming or smooth enough for this kind of thing, wooing ladies & such. Thank you for sharing this, HottNess.
14th Oct 2013 4:57am
14th Oct 2013 7:44pm
Hot Damn and I've been missing this work of fantastic art of poetry. Keep doing your thing for your one to behold my friend.
15th Oct 2013 2:56pm
15th Oct 2013 00:56am
15th Oct 2013 2:57pm
15th Oct 2013 11:21am
The imagery is very powerful, the story starts out
innocent n sweet, but then it has a dark feeling to it as if
You want the reader to know the deflowering WASNT
wanted, hope I'm wrong but those 'buzz' words: whore, bleed, ripping... Could be taken in a negative manner
Although I realize it could just be that inevitable 'cherry'
popping as child/teen/adult experiences begin to transpire.
All in all, outstanding ink....
innocent n sweet, but then it has a dark feeling to it as if
You want the reader to know the deflowering WASNT
wanted, hope I'm wrong but those 'buzz' words: whore, bleed, ripping... Could be taken in a negative manner
Although I realize it could just be that inevitable 'cherry'
popping as child/teen/adult experiences begin to transpire.
All in all, outstanding ink....
i love some understanding .You got it
Thanks friend
it was acrostic which led him to pop it lol
Thanks friend
it was acrostic which led him to pop it lol
16th Oct 2013 7:58pm
