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Ti' punch
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And could be drunk
Just a little bit
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And could say stupid
Words to my love
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And I prefer to go
In my bed to sleep
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And I am happy now
To preserve my love
Ti' punch with rum
And could be drunk
Just a little bit
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And could say stupid
Words to my love
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And I prefer to go
In my bed to sleep
Sometimes I drink
Ti' punch with rum
And I am happy now
To preserve my love
Published 13th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
13th Oct 2013 8:30am
Had to look up Ti punch - sounds a bit like a daquiri. And yeah - one or two of those would do it.
I just find tequila makes me ... smile.
I just find tequila makes me ... smile.
13th Oct 2013 8:56am
Ti'punch is like daikiri without lemon juice : 1 part of sirup and 4 parts of rum, with a slice of green lemon. In my case, I make my own sirup and use prepared rum I have made one or two month before...
Thank you, petite, for your comment!
Thank you, petite, for your comment!
