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Melt With You
Melt with me..
Into the Shamanic fields
Of Trips taken with the soul...
As we unfold in millions of ways
Watch ...as we billow into a Purple Haze
While lazy clouds wave...us into
Another Universe
That burst in multicolor crayola picasos
That smile while skittles pour from
there eye sockets...
Then we blast off like rockets...
running rings around Saturn
then do loop de loops on
Orions Belt...
As we realize...
With starz in are eyes
that this...
Is the best we've ever felt
As we melt... into the Earth
Atmosphere sinking down
in bewtween earth and hills
and mounds ....
Till we settle in Tall grass
and learn the language of grasshoppers
Yes... I want to melt with you
Into oblivion while passing
Black holes and other dimensions
I want to pound on Pandora's Door
Daring her to open...
I want to melt with you
Like ink on paper from
this pen...
Into the Shamanic fields
Of Trips taken with the soul...
As we unfold in millions of ways
Watch ...as we billow into a Purple Haze
While lazy clouds wave...us into
Another Universe
That burst in multicolor crayola picasos
That smile while skittles pour from
there eye sockets...
Then we blast off like rockets...
running rings around Saturn
then do loop de loops on
Orions Belt...
As we realize...
With starz in are eyes
that this...
Is the best we've ever felt
As we melt... into the Earth
Atmosphere sinking down
in bewtween earth and hills
and mounds ....
Till we settle in Tall grass
and learn the language of grasshoppers
Yes... I want to melt with you
Into oblivion while passing
Black holes and other dimensions
I want to pound on Pandora's Door
Daring her to open...
I want to melt with you
Like ink on paper from
this pen...
Published 10th Oct 2013
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10th Oct 2013 11:30pm
11th Oct 2013 00:29am
10th Oct 2013 11:56pm
"Yes... I want to melt with you
Into oblivion while passing
Black holes and other dimensions
I want to pound on Pandora's Door
Daring her to open...
I want to melt with you
Like ink on paper from
this pen..." <--that ending made me melt, Fire. :) Incredible Ink! Xo
Into oblivion while passing
Black holes and other dimensions
I want to pound on Pandora's Door
Daring her to open...
I want to melt with you
Like ink on paper from
this pen..." <--that ending made me melt, Fire. :) Incredible Ink! Xo
11th Oct 2013 00:30am
11th Oct 2013 3:03am
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12th Oct 2013 4:04am
12th Oct 2013 5:00am
Thank YOu my Lovely Soul...
oh everytime I see your monaker I smile!
XOXO
FIre
oh everytime I see your monaker I smile!
XOXO
FIre
12th Oct 2013 5:51am
You Bless me Dear!!!
Apologies for my elusiveness...overtime has been kicking my butt...but regular visits I hope shall resume...I have so missed Beautiful Writes such as Yours!!!
Apologies for my elusiveness...overtime has been kicking my butt...but regular visits I hope shall resume...I have so missed Beautiful Writes such as Yours!!!
12th Oct 2013 5:13am
Girl, I want to melt with you to and deliver such beautiful poetry as you always lay down "Like ink on paper from
this pen..." Priceless! God bless you my friend.
this pen..." Priceless! God bless you my friend.
28th Dec 2013 6:52am
I envy the soil of the land you enter when you melt into dreamscape, because it always feels like you leave seeds behind in every trip you release.
2nd Feb 2015 7:23pm
Interesting.... very genuine and sensitive. lots of double sentence as, as that, that... "Crayola (brand of crayon)/Picasso's" are names & both should be in cap's. keep grindin
