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Honesty = Trust
Why do many of us say that Our Lord is not real?
Why do our sons and daughters sent to fight Wars?
Why do we get sent to places without just cause?
Why do we judge by the color of someone’s skin?
Why do we steal from the poor and give to the rich?
Why do we deny our Nation is full of lies?
Why do we take our lives for granted?
All of these questions can be answered by in just two words.
Because without Honesty and there is no Trust.
Why do our sons and daughters sent to fight Wars?
Why do we get sent to places without just cause?
Why do we judge by the color of someone’s skin?
Why do we steal from the poor and give to the rich?
Why do we deny our Nation is full of lies?
Why do we take our lives for granted?
All of these questions can be answered by in just two words.
Because without Honesty and there is no Trust.
Published 8th Oct 2013
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8th Oct 2013 1:49am
I like this, very topical. Just a few suggestions. After 'Daughters' should be 'get' (or you could write it this way:"Why are our sons and daughters sent to fight wars?"
That, and the last bit might look better if it were written "Because without Honesty, there is no Trust."
That, and the last bit might look better if it were written "Because without Honesty, there is no Trust."
19th Mar 2015 6:00pm
I agree... this is a very wide topical piece.
So many answers and you just summed it up to the main factor.
Well Done.
Darker.
So many answers and you just summed it up to the main factor.
Well Done.
Darker.
