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Re: not in the mood...
7th Oct 2013 11:45pm
Lol! Can't say I can relate to this, since I'm a bit of a nymphomaniac... But it made me laugh xD
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re: Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 00:01am
she didn't! I was just
having a bad day, I guess...
I can laugh about
it now..:)
having a bad day, I guess...
I can laugh about
it now..:)
Re: not in the mood...
Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 00:14am
gritty lol
yea why does sand makes us feel like that...or is it the hands that make you feel like that..hmm
yea why does sand makes us feel like that...or is it the hands that make you feel like that..hmm
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re: Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 00:24am
sometimes the touch
of a feather can feel
soft...and sometimes
it just tickles...and
something rough against
the skin can be as good
as scratching an itch, or
else it can hurt...strange,
isn't it..:)
of a feather can feel
soft...and sometimes
it just tickles...and
something rough against
the skin can be as good
as scratching an itch, or
else it can hurt...strange,
isn't it..:)
Re: not in the mood...
Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 00:21am
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re: Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 00:27am
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8th Oct 2013 1:11am
Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 1:17am
I like your interesting take on this form. Brought me a chuckle. Good stuff.
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re: Re: not in the mood...
9th Oct 2013 00:18am
I like to take an old and tried
and trusted form and make
a little light of it......:)
and trusted form and make
a little light of it......:)
Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 2:04am
GOL! Either you...A R E--or you, A R E N 'T...'in the mood', right?
(But...OH...such a vivid image this creates! Smiled--out loud, though! Hee! Hee! )
(But...OH...such a vivid image this creates! Smiled--out loud, though! Hee! Hee! )
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re: Re: not in the mood...
9th Oct 2013 00:21am
if I can raise a smile,
even if that is all I can
raise (!) then it is worth
while.........:)
even if that is all I can
raise (!) then it is worth
while.........:)
Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 3:16am
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9th Oct 2013 00:23am
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9th Oct 2013 2:30am
Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 3:52pm
oh man, now this'n is a loop'dee'dooper for what-is-left-of-'me'
in this socalled world,
as iyam alone on the beach, thee edge of this socalled world, alone, or wit my brothers dear 6 lb dawgie.....
no
sandy hand to comfort inside my shorts as eye gaze at the
marinant eternity that will likely take me during my risky cavortings in big surf & swift currents a mile south of where any other 'beach lovers' would ever notice my tragic hand above the waters...
but that's why 6 lb Alice it wit me....i'd feel terrible to not be able to drive her home
jesu'cristi! life is com plicated.....
in this socalled world,
as iyam alone on the beach, thee edge of this socalled world, alone, or wit my brothers dear 6 lb dawgie.....
no
sandy hand to comfort inside my shorts as eye gaze at the
marinant eternity that will likely take me during my risky cavortings in big surf & swift currents a mile south of where any other 'beach lovers' would ever notice my tragic hand above the waters...
but that's why 6 lb Alice it wit me....i'd feel terrible to not be able to drive her home
jesu'cristi! life is com plicated.....
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re: Re: not in the mood...
9th Oct 2013 00:27am
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9th Oct 2013 2:24pm
Re: not in the mood...
8th Oct 2013 11:17pm
It could have been worse,
you could have gotten
a sand wedgie...
now that chafes...
you could have gotten
a sand wedgie...
now that chafes...
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re: Re: not in the mood...
9th Oct 2013 00:29am