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'Instantaneous'
It could come
from a sigh
sensed
from deep within
Be felt
from the smile
shining
all over the grin
Yet, it's quite apparent
where this magic
emanates
As if feeding
a homeless vagrant
she exhaled
the aura of love
and in a instant
heaven, was where
his thoughts went...
from a sigh
sensed
from deep within
Be felt
from the smile
shining
all over the grin
Yet, it's quite apparent
where this magic
emanates
As if feeding
a homeless vagrant
she exhaled
the aura of love
and in a instant
heaven, was where
his thoughts went...
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Re: 'Instantaneous'
6th Oct 2013 6:01pm
The beauty and warmth
from the inside
makes the difference.
You feel it instantaneously.
A wonderfully heartfelt piece, Poe!
from the inside
makes the difference.
You feel it instantaneously.
A wonderfully heartfelt piece, Poe!
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re: Re: 'Instantaneous'
6th Oct 2013 6:49pm
Yup, I agree
n I Thank you my sweetheart, ur
the best n I truly appreciate you!
n I Thank you my sweetheart, ur
the best n I truly appreciate you!
Re: 'Instantaneous'
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 6:53pm
Beautiful piece PM ....
~Sigh~
~Sigh~
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re: Re: 'Instantaneous'
6th Oct 2013 8:43pm
Aaaawwww my sweetness, your wonderful!
Thank you so much I'm flattered n deeply appreciate you :)
Thank you so much I'm flattered n deeply appreciate you :)
Re: 'Instantaneous'
6th Oct 2013 7:12pm
Re: 'Instantaneous'
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 8:06pm
Something about her...yes, this most definitely.. instantaneously you made us believe in the beauty of love.
PIKM you did it again :))
PIKM you did it again :))
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Re: 'Instantaneous'
6th Oct 2013 11:40pm
Re: 'Instantaneous'
7th Oct 2013 7:48am
Beautifully Penned Poetik!!! the ending was the icing on the cake..enjoyed!
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re: Re: 'Instantaneous'
7th Oct 2013 1:35pm
Aaaawwww you're always sooooooo sweet my friend, I'm truly
humbled n feel blessed to have your support... Thank you :)
humbled n feel blessed to have your support... Thank you :)
Re: 'Instantaneous'
7th Oct 2013 5:37pm
re: Re: 'Instantaneous'
7th Oct 2013 6:50pm
Thank you, I'm pleased you liked this n truly appreciate your time n thoughts... I will be swinging by your way soon to return the favor :)