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stream

like a river we
ripple and swirl and follow
the course of your bed...

Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 6th Oct 2013

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Re: stream

jagracia

6th Oct 2013 1:02am

mind the wet spot, p...

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dartford (Paul S...)

6th Oct 2013 1:20am

I'm drying to..!

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Re: stream

catlady

6th Oct 2013 1:11am

You are so very clever with your words- This just proves it (again)

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dartford (Paul S...)

6th Oct 2013 1:24am

well as I'm probably
(definately) your biggest
fan I'm chuffed with that..:)

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Re: stream

Lookawaynow (Rose)

6th Oct 2013 6:16am

Lol great
Love the word play
It's addictive

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dartford (Paul S...)

6th Oct 2013 11:37am

Oh, thanks, Rose...:)

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Re: stream

Anonymous

6th Oct 2013 10:09am

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dartford (Paul S...)

6th Oct 2013 11:40am

Thank you, my friend, very
glad you liked..:)

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Re: stream

Anonymous

6th Oct 2013 5:34pm

I like the cryptic style, the metaphor perfectly swirled like a cyclone landing in bed.

dartford (Paul S...)

6th Oct 2013 5:57pm

perhaps 'trickled' would have
done.....:)

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Re: stream

Chiyo (Miss Chi)

6th Oct 2013 5:36pm

Synchronized swimming perhaps?
I love your playing
with words
and minds ...

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dartford (Paul S...)

6th Oct 2013 6:06pm

I swim like I write,
I'm afraid, short lengths
only...thanks, Chi :)

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