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My love's fight against flu
This morning, my love has a strongest flu
You know what? I love really this while!
First of all, I give her a cup of herb tea
And I prepare a hot bath with herb inside
I carry my love in my arms up to the bathroom
Undress her and put carefully inside the tub
After that, I come inside and begin a massage
Usually, this massage ends hotly by a loving time
But today, she is too tired, just I mass her silky skin
And after drying her body, I carry her up to our bed
She sleeps a long time and I am unable to do
Something else than watching her face and
Test all ten minutes her fever... why ten minutes?
Why not? You prefer five minutes? Too much !
And the day stretches out along the hours
You moan sometimes in your sleep
Each time, I come with a wet glove
And wipe your sweaty forehead slowly
After a day and a night, you are better
And you are so happy of my care
That we have the most sweet while
Of love, long time and deep love
Finally, flu is not a so bad ill for the other
If you take time and softness for your love
You know what? I love really this while!
First of all, I give her a cup of herb tea
And I prepare a hot bath with herb inside
I carry my love in my arms up to the bathroom
Undress her and put carefully inside the tub
After that, I come inside and begin a massage
Usually, this massage ends hotly by a loving time
But today, she is too tired, just I mass her silky skin
And after drying her body, I carry her up to our bed
She sleeps a long time and I am unable to do
Something else than watching her face and
Test all ten minutes her fever... why ten minutes?
Why not? You prefer five minutes? Too much !
And the day stretches out along the hours
You moan sometimes in your sleep
Each time, I come with a wet glove
And wipe your sweaty forehead slowly
After a day and a night, you are better
And you are so happy of my care
That we have the most sweet while
Of love, long time and deep love
Finally, flu is not a so bad ill for the other
If you take time and softness for your love
Published 5th Oct 2013
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5th Oct 2013 5:57pm
5th Oct 2013 6:05pm
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 6:36pm
Next time i have the flu, i'm calling you Malin, you seem to be much better than a doctor.
Your love is in good hands with you by her side :)
Your love is in good hands with you by her side :)
5th Oct 2013 9:18pm
Probably, but I am sorry to decline, my love surely should not accept it... particulary the sequence in the bathroom! But I appreciate the comment for the poem and the method. Show this poem to your boyfriend. Very easy to do, just have the wish to do!
