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Holy Fuck
A boy made from starlight, innocence and the echoes of music in heartbeats
held a thing of sun baked stone and watched it become god.
He consumed a thing made holy and the pillars of the divine wept through the colour leaking from his smile.
She sat before him and bled tears made from the sweat of atlas for what must now come.
He stood tall and pissed his scorn down onto adoring lips and waiting eyes
held a thing of sun baked stone and watched it become god.
He consumed a thing made holy and the pillars of the divine wept through the colour leaking from his smile.
She sat before him and bled tears made from the sweat of atlas for what must now come.
He stood tall and pissed his scorn down onto adoring lips and waiting eyes
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Re: Holy Fuck
4th Oct 2013 3:39am
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4th Oct 2013 1:13pm
religion kills the higher brain. great imagery. soaked with vile, stinging disgust masked as adoration.
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18th Oct 2013 5:26pm
Lol you forgot liberal doses of guilt, that bit will fuck up any high.
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5th Oct 2013 4:57am
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18th Oct 2013 5:25pm
Thanks soul, I guess I was just in that cynical smile type of mood that day. :)
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18th Oct 2013 6:49pm
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18th Oct 2013 10:56pm
If you have some contact info I'll gladly pitch it to him, I'd sure appreciate the dough.
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14th Oct 2013 11:22am
A write with Attitude!
I loved and great enjoyed this piece!
Great Work!
Darker
I loved and great enjoyed this piece!
Great Work!
Darker
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18th Oct 2013 5:23pm
Thank you muchly, it's always nice to see a new face around these parts. Thanks for the read :)