Fuck you!

This is powerful. I felt your pain in my heart. The person who hurt you, hatred grew for them. I loved this.

Thank you so much was hopeing anybody would be able to understand it the way I wanted it to be understood.

Very dark and also very powerful. It sends a clear cut message. The imagery is very enhancing. It played like a movie. Excellent work

Thank you as always your opinion means a lot :)

Deep is the hate in this piece sweets!!
Powerfully dark messages set in!!
Awesome write sweets!!
Grand job!


Sir Lancelott

Thank you so much it is well appreciated

This is very sad. I can relate to this pain. At times you just think why don't you just take it all. :(

Exactly when I say you wouldn't like me when I'm angry is because of two reactions one I hurt myself in the ways I want to hurt you or two I snap and black out and really hurt you.

I'm bit this poem is a sign of weakness

Sign of weakness? How so?

It's its very well written and evokes powerful emotions, hurt, anger and hopelessness.

The hopelessness shouldn't have been evident but I can't really hide it as well as I can on my face since I have give up most of my hope when I get that angry

Wow, right off the bat, you set the tone with two words:  "Fuck you!".  And using a knife, the ultimate macabre tool, to allow someone (or yourself??) to decimate whatever or whoever is tormenting you.  Nice piece.  Not safe to be that mad, ay?  That's what I got and liked it.

Thank you and my anger is something you don't want to unleash cause it will get deadly for someone whether it's me at my own hand or someone else at my hand.

Boom, Victoria.. this goes in the list.. lead with your heart always.. great write..


Dave