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The Painting

Cantaloupes on the wall
make me think of fall
I saw you in the park
just before dark
fallen leaves all around
making their crunching sound
grey skies and cold days
I'm stuck in your maze
cantaloupes on the wall
make me think of you.

Written by Hashman

Published 29th Sep 2013

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Re: The Painting

Anonymous

29th Sep 2013 10:34pm

I'm so bad... keep giggling that cantaloupes make you think of her...

Hashman

29th Sep 2013 10:55pm

Your funny P_M ,I never saw that coming,but you are so right...peace and love to you.

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Re: The Painting

dartford (Paul S...)

29th Sep 2013 10:35pm

fruitful piece..) seriously,
tho, you have made
a great picture of this...

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Hashman

29th Sep 2013 11:02pm

Ha,I must be a basket case ;)...thank you sir.

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Re: The Painting

Anonymous

30th Sep 2013 1:00am

hmm melons on the wall..good thing it wasn't melons hanging from ceiling lol
made me smile Mr. Hash :))

Hashman

30th Sep 2013 11:57am

Glad you enjoyed Ms.Vee...keep on smiling :)

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Re: The Painting

DarkEnchantress

30th Sep 2013 1:13am

May i also venture to say, that this has actually made me smile....right out loud! ;)

Thankfully, it wasn't pumpkins!?!

I really appreciate your imagery in this piece....enjoyed! :)

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Hashman

30th Sep 2013 12:02pm

I'm happy to make you happy,peace to you....thanks for stopping by :)

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Re: The Painting

Poetikmind (_---_)

30th Sep 2013 5:06am

Lol cantaloupes make u think of her huh? Personally
Ai don't think of them til I see watermelons lol jk... I like this bro. The imagery is needless to say great, n the lightheartedness illicits a laugh it's also got that sweetness factor going on. :)