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Dangerous
Dangerous, this 'MIND'
blends, morphs into a fist
malice on the mental
brought me to this
So you wanted
to rattle the cage
of the word beast
Battle!?? Ha! Son you can't
grapple with the concepts
on which I feast
Dangerous, like TNT
I'm set to explode
a foot, right up the rectum
ANAL-I- Lies within my spectrum
me you disrespected
you already detected
I got the razzle to dazzle
you frazzled Bigga boo
leavin' you witless without a clue,
BOY, dont you see
how my terse ill
will verse whip up on you!?
Don't front like ya ass
sass can pass in MY CLASS
I'm top self
adorned with verbal wealth!
your sad, sorry, sneak attacks
are simplistic, n' gibberishly
whack they lack tact
truly your testicules
are most likely smaller than your 'mini
pickle' kid stop jerkin' with the surgeon
because it will get all messy
if I REALLY start verbing
The Urban Son, ain't the one you wanna
FUCK with, so git, go cluck n' fluff your feathers
somewhere else to gain your 'fame'
trust and believe, your cry for battle is a bust
there's nothing you can do to a mind so Dangerous!
blends, morphs into a fist
malice on the mental
brought me to this
So you wanted
to rattle the cage
of the word beast
Battle!?? Ha! Son you can't
grapple with the concepts
on which I feast
Dangerous, like TNT
I'm set to explode
a foot, right up the rectum
ANAL-I- Lies within my spectrum
me you disrespected
you already detected
I got the razzle to dazzle
you frazzled Bigga boo
leavin' you witless without a clue,
BOY, dont you see
how my terse ill
will verse whip up on you!?
Don't front like ya ass
sass can pass in MY CLASS
I'm top self
adorned with verbal wealth!
your sad, sorry, sneak attacks
are simplistic, n' gibberishly
whack they lack tact
truly your testicules
are most likely smaller than your 'mini
pickle' kid stop jerkin' with the surgeon
because it will get all messy
if I REALLY start verbing
The Urban Son, ain't the one you wanna
FUCK with, so git, go cluck n' fluff your feathers
somewhere else to gain your 'fame'
trust and believe, your cry for battle is a bust
there's nothing you can do to a mind so Dangerous!
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 28th Sep 2013
| Edited 29th Sep 2013
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Re: Dangerous
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 4:11pm
Oh man, You got my blood boiling with this piece, this is one raw piece and I know too well where you're coming from. I"m with you PIKM, right there besides you.

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re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 1:14am
Thank you my sweet one, truly appreciate you n hey check out ur BOY below, trying to be an ass for attention apparently... There's so many here that wanna hate, like I did something to their sory asses... I'm just tired of it n had to spill a lil ill...
But if that fool or any other one THINKS I can't hit harder
They really are STUPID. I appreciate u sweetness :)
But if that fool or any other one THINKS I can't hit harder
They really are STUPID. I appreciate u sweetness :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Sep 2013 3:20pm
29th Sep 2013 3:18pm
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re: re: re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 4:09pm
I found your comment to be insincere, you claim it was weak becuz of your own inability to ink something worth commenting
N I NEVER replied to YOU dumbfuck, I was replying to others
n of course I know I can block your sorry ass...
N I NEVER replied to YOU dumbfuck, I was replying to others
n of course I know I can block your sorry ass...
Re: Dangerous
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 4:56pm
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re: Re: Dangerous
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 1:18am
Ricky, seriously, wtf?

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re: re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 1:41am
Yea... This ALWAYS happens when these clowns don't get their attention... They go after ppl who do NOTHING to them
n spread negativity.
n spread negativity.
Re: Dangerous
28th Sep 2013 11:02pm
re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 1:17am
Lol thanks bro! I wasn't really trying to say too much, but the clown above you, along with he one who DEMANDED I NOT use "his" name clearly want a lil SHINE in ur their life lol appreciate u always n much love to u n yours :)
Re: Dangerous
28th Sep 2013 11:15pm
You sure showed him! All of this for a username? Lol,ai. He had it coming to him. He just got served hehe.
Awesome scribe (:
Awesome scribe (:
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re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 1:19am
Aaaawww thank u babe! N yea I tried to be tolerant be so be ppl want drama in their ljfe lol... Truly grateful for your support always :)
Re: Dangerous
Anonymous
29th Sep 2013 1:07am
Strong powerful write, Poetikmind. Well said, my friend. Great awesome ink! :-)
Peace & Love
Carlene
Peace & Love
Carlene

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re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 1:25am
Thank you Carlene, my dear friend as always you paint
smiles on my face, n I deeply appreciate that n you always :)
smiles on my face, n I deeply appreciate that n you always :)
Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 3:42am
re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 4:06am
Lol u know what bro? I think I will do that just becuz u asked! Thank u, truly n sincerely grateful n appreciate u bro! :)
Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 3:45am
This is fucking great you hammered it.. without missing a beat.. excellent vent.. peace Crim
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re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 4:12am
Aaaaawww u gave me a huge smile! I'm deeply grateful, happy you liked n heading ur way to return the sweet consideration :)
re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 5:08pm
Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 3:37pm
Great piece had the rhythm to rap and flowed off the tongue like angry coffee hyped and ready to rumble. The word is certainly a mighty sword when the quill sits in the right hand Bravo thanks. Syn
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re: Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 4:15pm
Re: Dangerous
29th Sep 2013 6:21pm
Yes! Record it, please, as Jazzmanor proposed! I'd like to hear it, too. It's a strong write, Poe. Something weird is going on on DUP that you have to put your anger about another poet into such a striking poem.
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re: Re: Dangerous
30th Sep 2013 4:42am
That 'something' is getting attacked for no reason, of course
when I decided to respond...lets just say, I ain't the one...
But worry not, I'm not wasting anymore time on idiots
when I decided to respond...lets just say, I ain't the one...
But worry not, I'm not wasting anymore time on idiots
Re: Dangerous
30th Sep 2013 4:08am
Enough of your energy already! Two 'anger' poems is too much of your time my friend! Xo
Back to the 'poetry' that I deeply love, please! Xo
Poetic love~
Back to the 'poetry' that I deeply love, please! Xo
Poetic love~
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re: Re: Dangerous
30th Sep 2013 4:45am
Yea, I know but it's not like I was gonna like a wilting flower...
No worries I'm done... For now lol thanks sweetness, appreciate u much
No worries I'm done... For now lol thanks sweetness, appreciate u much