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The Cause
This is a world
of noble causes
my silently open
eyes can see perceive
the complex effects
affects of your lips
red fascinating sensual
upon mine: if history
repeats itself this
moment can't.
of noble causes
my silently open
eyes can see perceive
the complex effects
affects of your lips
red fascinating sensual
upon mine: if history
repeats itself this
moment can't.
Published 27th Sep 2013
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4th Oct 2013 9:40pm
if history repeats itself
this moment can't.
unless we have an alternate-reality to rely on to kickstart repeats of magic-moments.
then again, I guess we wouldn't really want that, hey?
it may lack the original authenticity.
love this piece, there's a silent yet powerful pulse rippling beneath these words..
your style is changing somewhat.
what I like about your lovely work - is the consistent integrity and distinctive flow, despite minor tweaks.
bravo!
this moment can't.
unless we have an alternate-reality to rely on to kickstart repeats of magic-moments.
then again, I guess we wouldn't really want that, hey?
it may lack the original authenticity.
love this piece, there's a silent yet powerful pulse rippling beneath these words..
your style is changing somewhat.
what I like about your lovely work - is the consistent integrity and distinctive flow, despite minor tweaks.
bravo!
5th Oct 2013 00:34am
