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Misunderstand Me!
please misunderstand me
when i tell you what i don't need
when i show you how to love me
dont you dare take heed
no need to show concern
hell, you can leave
dont bother to say goodbye
i promise i won't grieve
it's not like im feeling you
nope not in the least lil bit
im no puppet, my heart has
no strings attached to it
im only gonna think about me
never you and i,certainly not we
didn't i tell you
you can't do a damn thang for me
...but tell me did you read
the fine print closely
did my eyes say
what my lips couldn't speak
i wonder what caused
that look in your eyes
curious was it simply
a reflection of mine
did i tell on myself
did what i was trying to hide show
could you look in my eyes
and instantly know
i dont want it to be misconscrued
or lost in translation
please misunderstand me
this isn't love, just infatuation
when i tell you what i don't need
when i show you how to love me
dont you dare take heed
no need to show concern
hell, you can leave
dont bother to say goodbye
i promise i won't grieve
it's not like im feeling you
nope not in the least lil bit
im no puppet, my heart has
no strings attached to it
im only gonna think about me
never you and i,certainly not we
didn't i tell you
you can't do a damn thang for me
...but tell me did you read
the fine print closely
did my eyes say
what my lips couldn't speak
i wonder what caused
that look in your eyes
curious was it simply
a reflection of mine
did i tell on myself
did what i was trying to hide show
could you look in my eyes
and instantly know
i dont want it to be misconscrued
or lost in translation
please misunderstand me
this isn't love, just infatuation
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Re: Misunderstand Me!
27th Sep 2013 2:44pm
So much more here inside the unspoken.....an ingenious piece of ink. The word "misunderstand" is so heavy.
Wonderful ink !
Wonderful ink !
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
27th Sep 2013 3:29pm
Re: Misunderstand Me!
27th Sep 2013 3:37pm
brilliant writing love your flow actually snapped my fingers out loud after reading this really enjoyed this much love....
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
27th Sep 2013 4:10pm
Re: Misunderstand Me!
Anonymous
27th Sep 2013 11:51pm
Reading it for the third time in a row, this time out loud...wonderful piece.
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
28th Sep 2013 6:58pm
Re: Misunderstand Me!
28th Sep 2013 00:04am
Ok then know if I'm misunderstanding you correctly, ur sorely wanting, needing, happy to be in love
n giving all the passion of your being to this
Horribly understanding guy :)... I agree with MM...this WAS brilliant! :)
n giving all the passion of your being to this
Horribly understanding guy :)... I agree with MM...this WAS brilliant! :)
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
29th Sep 2013 3:45am
you misunderstand me so well poetik :) thank you kindly for reading and the lovely comment - hugz
Re: Misunderstand Me!
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 2:52am
I love how clearly you lay down the misunderstandings with so much passion and strength.
Powerful ink!
Powerful ink!
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
29th Sep 2013 3:46am
My humbled thanks Vee much appreciation for your kind comment, glad you enjoyed!
Re: Misunderstand Me!
8th Oct 2013 1:17am
The way I Misunderstood this killing me. How I could I like this piece. It's not like well written or a good read. I won't be doing anymore reading. :(
Thank for the share
Thank for the share
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
9th Oct 2013 1:52pm
thank you kindly for taking the time to read my thoughts and for the fabulous feedback..much appreciation -hugs
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28th Dec 2013 6:03am
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Re: Misunderstand Me!
6th May 2014 2:00am
Sounds like one of the first poems I ever wrote that starts off " Please do not love me and if you must stay wary of black clouds..."
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re: Re: Misunderstand Me!
8th May 2014 1:35pm
Thank you kindly for reading and Commenting.. I look forward to checking out your poems :)