Flip-Flop "Poem"

Very tender...a 21st century hymn...

i was very afraid of a poet's review! it felt half-assed because it was so quick coming out, but i thought it was cute. thank you. [:
edit: well, not very afraid, just not optimistic. do you see the satire if i titled it "digital age"?

Well...I do once you say it out loud! Positively scandalous :-)

well i have enjoyed ur flippi and floppyness and the last three lines are so perfect that envy you for placing them:-)

thank you, Anando. you're so kind. [:

poems like this, bold but you made sound cute, only you can pull it off!  :)

actually, i think you guys are going over *my* head now! hemi caught my original meaning with that first comment, but then i thought it could have been taken more as observational about how people get addicted or attached to reader counts, facebook friend numbers in a 'digital age'. (heads buried in mobiles irritate me.) anyway, poetry rocks on the reader's perspective, so take from it what you will. i'm glad you enjoyed it. <3

An incredibly simple yet oddly profound and moving piece of verse. More concept than fiction, but good nonetheless. I'd like to see you expand on this theme. There are very deep depths here, I know it.

thanks, Jack, i was thinking about expanding this one but i think it says perfectly what i wanted it to say. i might do something else with the same idea (because it does have depths), as your encouragement is clearly productive! thank you for your input. [:

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and I should add clever and complete. S

thanks! i didn't even realize i hadn't responded, sweet of you to check back. [:

i'm not sure i understand that, but hey, you're exceedingly amusing and at least the man knows what he likes. [: