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Trails
There’s something about starting at the top
Trails that lean downwards…
There’s a sensation in feeling each ridge…
Feeling each compression of fibers remarkably
hmmmmm...Well and perfectly
Placed…
There’s something about being able
To sense
The respirations of life…hitched with anticipation
There’s something about descending downwards that leads
To a pause…
To an admiration…
To a freedom…
To a release…
There’s something about trails...
Especially when they start at the top.
Trails that lean downwards…
There’s a sensation in feeling each ridge…
Feeling each compression of fibers remarkably
hmmmmm...Well and perfectly
Placed…
There’s something about being able
To sense
The respirations of life…hitched with anticipation
There’s something about descending downwards that leads
To a pause…
To an admiration…
To a freedom…
To a release…
There’s something about trails...
Especially when they start at the top.
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24th Sep 2013 6:52pm
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25th Sep 2013 12:45pm
I love this my friend! Beautifully n skilled crafted! Only one lil thing... "Desceinding" is "Descending" :)... Otherwise, outstanding!
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Re: Trails
26th Sep 2013 7:32am
I don't know why this didn't feel like erotica to me. It exudes Love scribe to me in every facet of the word. So beautiful...Xo
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26th Sep 2013 1:19pm
hmmmm..thanks for sharing that feeling...might change the catagory--but honestly the inspiration came from thinking of a mans chest..and the trails downwards--subtle undercover erotica in my mind--but re-reading it could go multpile ways
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14th Mar 2014 8:45pm
"There's something about starting at the top..." I usually think of foreplay starting at the head and leading downwards.
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