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D.A.S.
Fall is here weather changes all around
clear blue sky turned cloudy and grey
still my ardor gets the best of me
so wont you come out and play?
The warmth is soothing over the stresses
grace found even in the most strident display
both instant and delayed gratification
in Cupid's grip can there be any other way?
"And as I watch the drops of rain
weave their weary paths and die
I know that I am like the rain
there but for the grace of you go I"
The deluge creates the steaming euphoria
by which energy and emotion reside
candor announces what is otherwise covert
a state in which body and soul are compelled to abide
Unchained is the power of robust meanderings
a resolution better then what congress will decree
understandable if your words speak of erotic
for being in you fits me to a tee
Lyrics Courtesy of Paul Simon, "Kathy's Song"
clear blue sky turned cloudy and grey
still my ardor gets the best of me
so wont you come out and play?
The warmth is soothing over the stresses
grace found even in the most strident display
both instant and delayed gratification
in Cupid's grip can there be any other way?
"And as I watch the drops of rain
weave their weary paths and die
I know that I am like the rain
there but for the grace of you go I"
The deluge creates the steaming euphoria
by which energy and emotion reside
candor announces what is otherwise covert
a state in which body and soul are compelled to abide
Unchained is the power of robust meanderings
a resolution better then what congress will decree
understandable if your words speak of erotic
for being in you fits me to a tee
Lyrics Courtesy of Paul Simon, "Kathy's Song"
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 2:38am
No idea what the title means - but this is one of your best.
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 4:01am
Oh, that fits perfectly! makes a great poem even better - thank you!
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24th Sep 2013 4:27am
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25th Sep 2013 1:23am
Thanks dusty; the story of this composition includes a less then positive pre-publishing review so I am glad the revision was looked at more favorably.
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Anonymous
24th Sep 2013 4:34pm
Nice one jazz manor....swirling!
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Re: D.A.S.
24th Sep 2013 11:23pm
Love the title as you put every word in this piece to life. A salute and thanks for the read.
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25th Sep 2013 1:27am
Thanks. "Kathy's Song" is one of my favorite folk/pop songs both to listen to and play myself.
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25th Sep 2013 4:47pm
I love these lines:
The deluge creates the steaming euphoria
by which energy and emotion reside
candor announces what is otherwise covert
a state in which body and soul are compelled to abide
...and Kathy's Song brings back a lot of bittersweet memories!
The deluge creates the steaming euphoria
by which energy and emotion reside
candor announces what is otherwise covert
a state in which body and soul are compelled to abide
...and Kathy's Song brings back a lot of bittersweet memories!
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25th Sep 2013 11:04pm