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The Alive Five
Waiting, hoping, and dreaming
that you want this semen nectar
as much as I want to give it
Demanding that though you have potential lovers
you have the time and intention to leave me fully expelled
with your many splendid manipulations
and the release of that fluid that builds up whenever I think of you
TASTE- smoothly reaches the tongue
SEE- the instrument of desire rise and grow
HEAR- me moan your name in uttermost urgency and relief
SMELL- the aroma of pheromones set ablaze
TOUCH- the body that is obsessed with the pleasure principal
that you want this semen nectar
as much as I want to give it
Demanding that though you have potential lovers
you have the time and intention to leave me fully expelled
with your many splendid manipulations
and the release of that fluid that builds up whenever I think of you
TASTE- smoothly reaches the tongue
SEE- the instrument of desire rise and grow
HEAR- me moan your name in uttermost urgency and relief
SMELL- the aroma of pheromones set ablaze
TOUCH- the body that is obsessed with the pleasure principal
Published 22nd Sep 2013
| Edited 9th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Sep 2013 10:14pm
All five sense rightly written jazz manor.
Strider
Strider
23rd Sep 2013 4:53am
Maybe but I have seen people argue when trying to state which order to put them in.
23rd Sep 2013 3:21am
Oh yes, your senses are total alive! I could taste, see, hear, smell....... and badly wanted to touch this ink! Xo
23rd Sep 2013 4:55am
24th Sep 2013 11:25pm
You put it down my man excellent read & write. You can feel the emotion pouring out the ink. Fantastic!
25th Sep 2013 10:46pm
25th Sep 2013 10:03pm
I really really love thus. This is a great read. I felt emotion every single word hit home. Good job I'm impressed
25th Sep 2013 10:51pm
I was lucky with the numbering of the senses at five. Easy number to rhyme with! Thanks for the read
27th Sep 2013 1:41am
MMM JazZMANOR you are officially my favorite under cover freak. i know for a fact that you are an animal behind closed doors.. lol. no doubt. love it.
